05-18-2010, 01:37 AM
Question # 1 Solution
18 May 2010
Project Manager of Jhelum
Dear Project Manager,
I am a engineer and i was shifted to Jhelum.
I have the family and i want to buy a new home in Jhelum. I see your banner in sadder bazaar. I have really impressed from your advertisements that you say about the town facilities. So now i want to know about your home. So please tell me whether you have the facility of water, gas, and electricity in your house or not and also tell me the security of the town and so on......
I will be very thankful to you on this act of kindness. Please contact me at the following numbers.
phone number:
office number:
Regard,
Your Neme
From Jhelum
Question # 2 Solution
Based:- Mary Jane will be mentally retarded for life.
Better / Improved: Mary Jane will have an intellectual impairment for life
Based:- Mrs. Ali, that old biddy, sometimes requires too much of her employees.
Better / Improved: Mrs. Ali, an old woman sometimes requires too much of her employees
Based:- Please remind everyone to bring his notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting.
Better / Improved: Please remind everyone to bring his or her notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting
Based:- The committee chairman led the meeting.
Better / Improved: The committee chairperson led the meeting
Based:- She is a heart attack victim.
Better / Improved: she died by heart attack.
18 May 2010
Project Manager of Jhelum
Dear Project Manager,
I am a engineer and i was shifted to Jhelum.
I have the family and i want to buy a new home in Jhelum. I see your banner in sadder bazaar. I have really impressed from your advertisements that you say about the town facilities. So now i want to know about your home. So please tell me whether you have the facility of water, gas, and electricity in your house or not and also tell me the security of the town and so on......
I will be very thankful to you on this act of kindness. Please contact me at the following numbers.
phone number:
office number:
Regard,
Your Neme
From Jhelum
Question # 2 Solution
Based:- Mary Jane will be mentally retarded for life.
Better / Improved: Mary Jane will have an intellectual impairment for life
Based:- Mrs. Ali, that old biddy, sometimes requires too much of her employees.
Better / Improved: Mrs. Ali, an old woman sometimes requires too much of her employees
Based:- Please remind everyone to bring his notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting.
Better / Improved: Please remind everyone to bring his or her notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting
Based:- The committee chairman led the meeting.
Better / Improved: The committee chairperson led the meeting
Based:- She is a heart attack victim.
Better / Improved: she died by heart attack.